Central California Poetry Journal

Volume 99 Number 1




The Poetry of Central California Page 9108

The Poetry of Jeff McKim


Jeff McKim resides in Felton, California. He began writing and publishing poetry while in college in the 1970s. Mr. McKim graduated from Cal Poly in San Luis Obispo with a degree in English. He currently refers to himself as a "soccer dad" and software engineer. Mr. McKim's poetry and reviews have been published in print and on the web.


Point Sur

"The light dove cleaving in free flight the thin air,
whose resistance it feels,
might imagine that her movements would be
far more free and rapid in airless space."
- From the "Critique of Pure Reason" by Immanuel Kant
Translated by JMD Meiklejohn

Facing the ocean from Point Sur
Wind blows hard and cold from seaward
Waves blown out by a north wind
Destroy themselves against
Rocks and cliffs
Great dark clouds race inland
In this place, these are the only
Definition of time

I want to dance with small
Truths, the fear and trembling in
Each moment

Hope bridging
Moment to moment

Hope bringing
Imagination

Imagination
Bringing time

No moment existing
Without being

Without touching
Without being touched

I suppose its growing darker
I suppose its time to go
Collar turned up
Against the wind
I watch as my feet take me
Down off this mountain


Davenport Cliffs - While you are away

At the bottom of
The Davenport cliffs
Gray evening sky
Dissolves into night

Each wave finds its place
On shore after
Crossing an ocean

The moment of
Darkness blows from
Seaward, sudden chill
Carried on salt air

I turn up my collar
Against the night wind
Strike the match
Light the tinder

Tongues lick cautiously
At dry wasted lumber
Until all is consumed
In flame


The Rope

An old Chumash Indian told me once
That the fight has been bred out
of modern livestock

Moving bulls from
Pasture to pasture for breeding
is now easier, safer

He went on that when he was young
They could control the wildest bull
By putting a ring through the soft tissue
Of the animal's nose; a short, fat rope was
Woven through the ring (this when the animal
Was still young and manageable)

To control the bull, the hand only had to
Touch the rope. Any bull
Understands the consequence.

Still yet,
In the beast every muscle taut
Eyes red swollen, trembling, focused
On the small thing standing
In front of him, not seeing
So much as knowing of the rope
And just one hope in all:
If the rope falls


Giving Way

1.
Storm colder than usual
Dropping many feet of powdered snow

Next morning
The unstable snow mass
Is still, quiet in early sun

Waiting for wind
No more than breath,
Touch soft as hands
Accidentally brushing,
Sound exactly equal to
An involuntary cry of
Surprise, ecstasy or pain

2.
Unknown antecedent

Ripple of rolling snow
Flakes interlocking,
Changing balance
Revealing a hidden weak seam
Sound like a breaking bone
A Tidal wave of
Frozen powder
Lunges forward
Gravity pulling downward
Almost a mile of
White white crashing
Toward the canyon floor
Hurricane wind
Then a roaring
Wave of raging snow
Compelling everything.

Briefly up the opposite canyon wall
Denouement of the brittle cracking of
Frozen tree limbs,
Enough silence between noise
To hear echoes,
Roots torn free,
All patient and carefully arranged Biology
Pulverized to randomness

Then unperceived quiet
Like cloud covered midnight.

3.
In the eastern Sierra Nevada,
Matterhorn Canyon lies
Behind a twelve thousand foot
Wall of pure granite

I pick through fallen trees
Uprooted, thrown and shattered
Seeming miles of debris
Left from an avalanche
Winter of '85

Sweat stings my eyes,
Legs tremble from climbing
Over tree remnants,
From walking around those
That can't be climbed

What was this place
Before the fall
Of ice and earth

What was it
Without the dismemberment
Of order


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